Thread:Crykov/@comment-44042603-20191106001342/@comment-12648415-20191106015918

Looks great! I made some changes to the summary on Huntsman's page though, to clarify some things, correct inaccurate information, and adding some paragraph breaks to make it a bit easier to read. Make sure not to use hyperbole in your descriptions, even though Sophie's feelings were likely reciprocated there was never any confirmation for this. Also Mehni's gender is never confirmed, but Sophie calls him a "bastard" so I decided to change the pronouns. It's also worth mentioning Mehni is named off of a former r/Rimworld moderator, who i've only ever seen people use he/him and they/them for. For future reference, if you're not sure about a character's gender, try to use they/them.